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EricO10
01-03-2008, 12:38 PM
hey, this is my second creation called concentric. it is a great mlg based team map, (not really designed for FFAs). This map is about 90% symetrical, and for a reason. I tried to give concentric a sanctuary type feel with two snipers. There is two bases, A and B, and then their respective sniper towers adjacent in the opposite corners. Each team has a starting advantage over their sniper tower, and team will try to take over the other sniper tower for map control. The advantage over the snipe towers makes the map 90% symetrical, with only access to the sniper tower from the respective side.

Check out my other map, called Towers. link in my signature


Here are some screenshots- leave feedback.

Concentric v2 is now up in my fileshare

changes include fixed spawn traps, and added cover and roof to bases, with a jump to the top. see new pictures below
Overview A
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/overviewA.jpg

Overview B
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/overviewB.jpg

A base
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/Abase.jpg

A base v2
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/ABasev2.jpg

B base v2
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/BBasev2.jpg

B base
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/Bbase.jpg

A snipe tower
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/Asnipetower.jpg

B snipe tower
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/Bsnipetower.jpg

View from B snipe 3
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/viewfromBsnipe.jpg

Middle Platform
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/MidPlat.jpg

B Base Jump
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/BBaseJump.jpg

A base Jump
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj191/EricO10/ABaseJump.jpg

Cadillac
01-03-2008, 01:51 PM
This map looks so extremely cluttered. Think about how many Halo maps have ever been good for competitive Halo without a lot of open areas. Midship, Warlock, Sanctuary, Chill Out, Prisoner, etc, etc.

Either way try simplifying it and it will instantly become more playable.

EricO10
01-04-2008, 12:01 AM
i know i might sound like a cocky guy who thinks his map is amazing, but i dont necessarily agree with that cause with the games ive played on it its mainly a mid range long range BR gameplay and doesnt really feel all that cramped. i think maybe these screenshots make it look cramped but there are definitly open areas on this map.. ill still take your comment into consideration though thanks.

Shadow193
01-04-2008, 12:10 AM
good but i believe u can acess the sniper towers 2 easy and 2 fast. there very close together. other that that i believe its good.

EricO10
01-04-2008, 01:16 AM
yeah i can see that.. its just foundry is sorta small in the first place without the back bases.. which i dont incorperate into my maps.

sstRico
01-04-2008, 01:56 AM
I think this map as a lot more potential then your other map( wich are still good). But I think you should work more on the bases like add a little something to them. At least close in the A and the B panels togheter so you can stand in that corner without being shot at.

Status
01-04-2008, 01:58 AM
This map looks pretty good.

blueterror
01-04-2008, 05:08 AM
part of me wants to experiment with having camo on the map instead of os for ctf gametypes. I dunno how effective it would be though( warlock did have ample cover for camo to be effective) , but you could def experiment with different control elements in the middle for fun (rocket like h1 wizard ctf, sniper, powerups) im sure that with this map design you could make it work with a wide variety of weapon placements. not bad.

EricO10
01-04-2008, 10:29 AM
all that sounds good, ill look at the bases maybe add a roof to it? or some more cover at least.. the signs will be changed also. and different powerups sound interesting for different gametypes, ill look into that thanks guys

EricO10
01-05-2008, 01:41 AM
concentric v2 is now up in the file share, check out the new pictures it adds even more to the gameplay

DoodTheDud
01-05-2008, 09:35 AM
from the screenshots, I think this map looks great, must've taken you alot of time also

EricO10
01-06-2008, 04:26 PM
if you liked my map towers from the contest round up 2, check this one out. i want this one to over 200 downloads like towers

i like this one better too hahah

dnbsmokebomb
01-06-2008, 09:40 PM
Bout to d/l, will leave feedback soon.

EricO10
01-06-2008, 11:21 PM
you are my hero

EricO10
01-08-2008, 11:12 PM
lets keep these downloads coming!!

thanks guys

chrisslams87
01-10-2008, 10:16 PM
i dont like how cluttered this map is. its going to be more of a lucky nade map than a skilled br map. possibly a good ffa map. good ideas though.

IMD1
01-11-2008, 05:45 PM
dam this map rocks with shotty/snipers with no radar. I love this map. i dont know much about balancing but i downloaded it and had a lot of fun playing it today. nice job man