Jurassic Park v2 the great remix to a great map

[gruntchmpion]

thnx to ur great imput i finally made the needed fixes to this map to make it all the more fun and balanced the pictures show areas that have been fixed
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download here
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18335238
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one of the 5 inner upper level hallways

[gruntchmpion]

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[Dragod]

The flamethrower concerns me...

[gruntchmpion]

lolol yeah u get roasted
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[zakboo]

Try this http://www.forgehub.com

[gruntchmpion]

from forge hub

[dandans]

looks kool but the flamethrower

[gruntchmpion]

this is funner on swat the flame is for slayer.

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[UnknOWNBAMF]

from forge hub

?.... nuff said.

[gruntchmpion]

i dont understand
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[zakboo]

i dont understand
I think what he was trying to say was
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[gruntchmpion]

u suck more

[Master Dictator]

exuse me Mr.08 ;)
First of all your making a SWAT MAP. We have shield in our games.
You have shield doors which promote camping.
Flamethrower is a very overpowering gun. 1 hit kill at close range and lets you peak around corners. MLG doesnt use it for that reason. Also it creats tons of lag. Notice why we only get one on the map?

[gruntchmpion]

in swat the only weapon is a br and those spts are easyly naded

[Fritzster]

Seeing what all the fuss is about and the blow by blow illegal bumps performing here. This is considered massive spam with the way you have formatted your OP and the way you handle the least of honest input. I'll give you an honest opinion. Knowing you are probably 10 years old of the sorts, I know for a fact that you will not appreciate much here. Here's an honest opinion, anyway, even though you probably don't deserve one. Learn from it, you're going to hate it, but be prepared youngster, that not much in sorts of ****ty map-making is tolerated in the MLG community. And knowing that you already got banned from Forge Hub then turn to MLG with your material is insulting.

The Review at Hand ...

When first loading up and flying around I notice an incredible amount of useless junk laying around the outer wall Boxes, Crates, Spools Barriers and Laggy-ful teleporters that lead to absolutely no where, on their sides. Gulping up valuable frame rate as it adds up. It is without a doubt a budget-glitched map; once again frame rate drop increase and to a certain extent reappear. Speaking of dropping, a player without any hesitation can jump out of the level by either a nade or by skill jumping, it is very possible. I now noticed the badly placed shield doors. Shield doors promote camping the way you have seemed to slap them up against poorly placed walls. I like the one random flat shield doors, and only because it's different, but shield doors don’t help gameplay, they hurt it to some extents.

What we have so far ...
Cons -


Useless junk surrounding the parameter of the map
Swat is not the most applicable of all the gametypes you could be building for
Frame rate drops on this map, badly
Out of map-map, this is terrible; the playability is anything but acceptable
Shield doors have rigorously proven bad in any to all situations, even good ideas won’t help this
Too many weapons, unnecessary, uncalled-for weapons
Random teleports out of random roof, not needed
Say hello to fusion coils, Hello, BAM, respawning random coils of fun is… once again not needed.
Structure is sloppy
Weapon choices are puke-fully bad
2 BRs right next to each other, for what
An Overshield, a Camo that do nothing to balance
Contrast of the map is off, so far off, that you’d think you’re in DZ fun zone
Open area, followed by crammed & cramped up hallways makes me claustrophobic, then Realize I have seen enough


The list can continue ...

Pros +


Original structure


Gamers here are going to dislike your maps even more if you claim brilliance over crap produced and "updated" on more maps nobody wants to see here in an MLG community. SWAT is disliked mostly, and therefore a bad concept to start off with, but with the quality map making produced from what I have seen there's not much to call a competition map. Once again my Opinions and Feedback take it or ignore it. Jurassic park, watch out for the dinos indeed. Not even a good attempt and needs to be shut down and re-imagined.

[gruntchmpion]

omg u wasted all that time to post a reply firstly swat rocks which makes ur argment blind an un educated.
secondly i know an idiot like you is gonna say "ur spelling is all wrong" and junk like that. another thing is ur maps are garbage with no real initiative for its key elements . and u wasted ur time righting all that which proves ur jealous of it.

[UnknOWNBAMF]

Face it you have no friends here. And yes you are "AN UNEDUCATED" 10 year old. You call Fritzster an idiot and a horrible map maker? He's one of the better forgers in these forums. Do all of us here a grand ol' favor and unplug your controllers, wrap them up, pack up your xbox 360, put everything in a box, and take it to goodwill for some other kid who appreciates what he has to have fun with it. Not just so you can continue making bad maps and blame other people for not liking it and calling them idiots. Maybe late ask mommy and daddy to buy you a barney doll to cuddle with.

[flix]

^True That^ haha sorry but you suck ass kid

[gruntchmpion]

any all you lamemos can suck cause theres nothing u cant do about it but sit there and b#ch about :banghead:
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with all that said enjoy this map and dont minds these too crack pots

[zakboo]

with all that said enjoy this map and dont minds these too crack pots

I have yet to see anyone say they enjoy this map, seems like you would get the signal by now.......so sorry but
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