My Map design Crossed

[hellrazor555]

Before I say anything about my map design just let me say I suck at forge. Instead of making a sketch up I decided to build a crappy version of the map.

Alright this is my first map that I have ever designed. That's the key word, this is not a fully functional map because no geo glitching was done and there are lots of bumps still around and the back wall isn't finished. I just want to know your thoughts on the bases and A and B sides. I don't know too much about spawns and sight lines but I wanted it to be a little slower paced than onslaught.

Here it is Control (http://www.bungie.net/stats/Halo3/FileShare.aspx?gamertag=Hellrazor555)

I will attempt to really forge this map but I'm pretty bad. I also have no patience with forge.

Here's the stats on the map

Plays slayer and CTF

6 BRS
6 Carbines
8 Plasmas
4 Frags
1 Mauler
1 Overshield
46 spawn points

Pics
Red Base
http://i400.photobucket.com/albums/pp89/hellrazor555/New2Base.jpg

Flag Area
http://i400.photobucket.com/albums/pp89/hellrazor555/Flagarea.jpg

A Corner
http://i400.photobucket.com/albums/pp89/hellrazor555/newAcorner.jpg

Bottom Mid
http://i400.photobucket.com/albums/pp89/hellrazor555/newbottom.jpg

Mid Bridge
http://i400.photobucket.com/albums/pp89/hellrazor555/newbridge.jpg

A Side
http://i400.photobucket.com/albums/pp89/hellrazor555/newaside.jpg

B Side
http://i400.photobucket.com/albums/pp89/hellrazor555/newbside.jpg

[hellrazor555]

The Pics are up.
They got messed up for some reason I'll try and fix them later. Sorry

[Dc0_Hezbolla]

it looks like it could be ok if you got rid of the bridges that go everywhere. they just sem like too much of a power position you could easily get kills from. but if you deleted them you would have to change the name from crossed

[hellrazor555]

Okay I hear what your saying so I decided to get rid of the bridges completely. The crane also caused lots of problems. So I redid the sides and what to know how everyone likes it. I renamed the map control, if u want to see the original Crossed it's still in my fileshare. Even though I changed the map all the stats didn't change. You can still use crossed CTF for Control

[Dc0_Hezbolla]

cool im sure it will be a great map once the final version is released! when can we expect the new version with the geos and better interlocking and stuff?

[hellrazor555]

Thanks and the final version shouldn't be too hard because there isn't any real hard geos or merges to do.
Should take a 2 or 3 months because of the holidays and other stuff going on in college. I got a lot of work coming up.

[CR0553D]

I think Crossed was a perfect name:)

[Jackass_Jon]

I think Crossed was a perfect name:)

stfu 08 noob!

[iM_xZonKeD]

I think Crossed was a perfect name:)
Choke like Fonzi kid.