Vengeance - An original map [Sketchup]

[050]

I just finished designing a map that i tried to make as original as possible. It is symmetrical but designed with team slayer in mind, but it should be good with most gametypes. I posted it because i do not have the time at the moment to forge it, and my xbox also has the RROD so it is up for adoption. Send me a message and i will send you the whole sketchup file if you want to help me out. If nobody takes it i will start it when i get by xbox back.

Any critisism would also be greatly appreciated. Here are some pics...

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7803/overview2map31tw3.jpg

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8567/overview3map31dg8.jpg

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3540/overviewmap31zu0.jpg


http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/368/bluebase31pj8.jpg

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/6207/bluebaseside31ek2.jpg

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/1746/bluebaseotherside31ef6.jpg

Thanks guys.

[tkforgiven]

this map looks sick. good multi lvl bases. very good job.

[DynamiteMD]

kinda looks like axis

[TroubledSociety]

Looks sick. Cant wait for you to get your Xbox back so I can get a whack at playing this map. I may be able to help you with the forging if you want.

[IHaywirEI]

thats so beastly, i wish i could sketch up like that

[Xylom]

I will adopt Vengeance, if you don't mind. Two questions. Can I make it on sandbox? (It is all the rage right now), would you like to be informed on it's progress? I don't use the MLG forums but I stumbled accross the adoption thread and this one was by far my favorite, so you won't be able to contact me on this profile, but, you can contact me at an email address I'm about to PM you (assuming the forum allows pming) or at http://www.forgehub.com/forum/members/xylom.html I check that pretty much daily but I don't check my email as often. Thx Kai Bai.

Edit: Map name is taken, Link http://www.forgehub.com/forum/mlg-maps/50046-vengeance.html

[b0b43]

First things first, Sketchup Adoption Thread (http://www.mlgpro.com/forum/showthread.php?t=223664). It is a sticky, so post it in there.

Secondly, you might want to rename it. Vengeance is a popular 4-base made by Kon Artist, that got featured on Forge Hub. Most of the people on this forum know of it, so it would probably be best if you changed its name to something slightly different.

It does look very good though. I don't know about the usefullness of the middle, but it is very creative.

[ToaStOmGi]

I can already feel the foundry lag on that map.

[ArturoJ]

Can I adopt this one?

[Flyrhatr]

Only thing I'd be concerned with about that map is the gameplay. Unless it's CTF the slayer will be very standoffish. No real point to rush etc unless you put camo or custom or a sniper or something to get more movement.

[yourmum94]

looks like it would be better if there wasnt so much stuff so the lag wasnt as bad