New forge map, Alchemy

[hellmaster]

Hey everyone I recently finished this map, I believe it has a very nice feel to it, plays well for CTF and SLayer, here's some screens and links to the fileshare:

Some screens:
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8825/64178902fullfn3.th.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=64178902fullfn3.jpg)

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2080/64190582fullrs2.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=64190582fullrs2.jpg)

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/2284/64190956fullzi7.th.jpg (http://img294.imageshack.us/my.php?image=64190956fullzi7.jpg)

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2875/64190786fullah4.th.jpg (http://img144.imageshack.us/my.php?image=64190786fullah4.jpg)

fileshare link: http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=64175603

[{obit-wan}]

that actually looks really sick...

[xidijin]

First thought....ONS REMAKE
Second thought: Spawns look like they will suck.
Third thought: I should give it a try...

I will rate it out of ten and give feedback once i have played the map.

Also add more info in the initial post. such as weapons, Img code pics, lines of symmetry, and bases.

[Aht_GLM_STTUB]

looks schweet is it in your file share, sorry if you announced it was get at me

GT: MLG BUTTS

[hellmaster]

Well the map actually has a bit of an Onslaughty feel because of the bases, which are like ons and snowbound, with ramps to each side, there is also a roof on each base that you can get to, it has nice lines of fire specially from base to base, and it also has two side bases that consist of 3 levels, also bottom mid is made to ressemble warlocks bottom mid with the stickys at each side. Map just has ur basic MLG weapons, Mauler bottom mid, Carbines on top of the side bases, and BR's at each of the star figures at the sides of each base.. sorry for the late info

link:http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=64175603

[b0b43]

Look to be honest, this isn't anything we haven't seen before. Two bases, two towers, and a middle section that is too open to be a vantage point. Look, I could go into a lot of detail and write an essay on why I don't like this map, but I'm not going to. It is also easy to tell a bad map when half of the back wall has been stolen from Onslaught and the walkway at the back of the bases that are geomerged into the wall have also been stolen from Onslaught. Yes, I can tell.

But I don't want to discourage you from forging, because for all I know you could be the next Salot or Fritzter. Everyone starts off with a generic two base map. Look at this (http://www.mlgpro.com/forum/showthread.php?t=196292) and this (http://www.mlgpro.com/forum/showthread.php?t=214985) as they are both amazing guides for making maps. Download the 6 Foundry maps up for testing and a few others on this forum, like Vanguard, Xyience, Omni and Expanse just to name a few. So don't dwell on this map for too long, look at what you did and how you can create a better map next time. I know this might be a bit harsh, but it is my opinion, and don't let it put you off forging if that is what you want to do. Good luck.

[hellmaster]

hey man its ok, this is like the 3rd or 4th time that I try forging, honestly I just play alot, so this is the first map I actually forged and I thought it came out good so just wanted to share it you guys, thats all

[b0b43]

hey man its ok, this is like the 3rd or 4th time that I try forging, honestly I just play alot, so this is the first map I actually forged and I thought it came out good so just wanted to share it you guys, thats all

Yeah, sorry if I sounded like a bit of a **** there, but if you want to get anywhere with your maps and get it noticed, you have to try something else. This forum sees so many two base maps similar to yours that you have to do something pretty damn special for a two base to be recognised. Again, I'm sorry if I offended you but I know you can do better.

[AMidgetAndAClub]

I see potential. I would wait and see what feedback and advice you get from some of the Gods on here.

[humanity]

is it possible to get on the top of the bases?